tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-779964474397122560.post5128552443192733212..comments2023-04-11T02:54:14.316-07:00Comments on Cultural Values through Photography: Les Forêts de BYUmarchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13339639747213787334noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-779964474397122560.post-65464130931837944112012-02-13T22:33:37.238-08:002012-02-13T22:33:37.238-08:00J'adore aussi le concept de cet essai mais par...J'adore aussi le concept de cet essai mais parfois à mon avis je ne vois pas le rapport entre la (première) texte et les images. A la point de technique, parfois (en anglais), there are certain pictures that I don't feel like you weren't working within the limitations of your camera or maybe you just didn't quite get the best shot possible.Roseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06439828882386296983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-779964474397122560.post-85987146664666629612012-02-12T15:28:31.439-08:002012-02-12T15:28:31.439-08:00Je suis d'accorde, le texte donne un sens aux ...Je suis d'accorde, le texte donne un sens aux photos. La deuxième image est beaucoup plus abstraite que toutes les autres. Peut-être c'est un peu trop différente dans cet essai, mais c'est ma préférée. Je me sens aussi que BYU est comme une forêt, parce que il y a trop de monde, alors il faut trouver "les espaces ouverts", ou dans les autres mots, les endroits où on peut avoir la solitude et refléter.Chloehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10263680725216809459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-779964474397122560.post-50259789229238597032012-02-10T11:09:24.826-08:002012-02-10T11:09:24.826-08:00I like the concept for this essay. The idea of liv...I like the concept for this essay. The idea of living in an artificial forest is really compelling. You do a nice job of incorporating the text, which really brings it all together. I think to make the photos stronger it would help to get a more unifying approach. That may be through making them black and white, or taking similar perspectives, or adding more cohesive variety. I would take out one of the stadium pictures instead of using two. Also, inside photography can be difficult so pay attention to your light. Finding good light will make just about any photo look amazing! Nice job!Brittneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13395568290233695519noreply@blogger.com